Matters of tone and style
Part 1: Chapter 1
Questions to consider
A. How is academic language different from conversational language? How did these distinctions develop?
B. Does impersonal, literal, and evidence-based language exclude some readers?
While language in general is quite dynamic, changing under myriad influences such as current events and culture, media, and economics, what is written for professional and/or academic purposes tends to adhere more consistently to established conventions. This is true because writing must be durable and transcend the distance between writer and audience. To that end, effective academic writing is characterized by its impersonal and objective tone and style.
These conventions are apparent in academic literature. Researchers acknowledge the work of previous scholars and build upon what has previously been documented by citing sources and using references following a well-established and recognized system. The organization of material – for example, the typical introduction-methods-results-discussion pattern of many research papers – serves to both bridge the distance and pay homage to academic standards.
Language in Action
A. How do conversations between these types of participants differ? Why is that?
1. Professional (e.g. physician, lawyer, government official) and client
2. Student and instructor, professor or teaching assistant
3. Colleagues or academic peers
B. When the communication between these participants is written, what forms are commonly used and in what way is this communication generally different from spoken communications?
Precise language is simple and literal. Forms of figurative language like clichés, metaphors, figurative comparisons, figures of speech, and other “slang”, “poetic” or “literary” devices are subject to broad interpretation and weaken professional efforts to persuade readers.
In much research writing, the aims comprise observing, analyzing, and synthesizing facts. What is observed is situated in context; information is structured as persuasion, using precise language, evidence, data, proofs, case studies, testimony, and logical reasoning to help the reader place ideas in the same context. Sometimes research writing involves solving a problem. Presenting the problem and possible solution(s) also tends to use a persuasive structure.
Objectivity, removing biases and preconceived notions from the reporting, is highly valued in research writing and supports the aim of persuasion. Successful research writing maintains an objective tone and academic voice through succinct vocabulary, accurate grammar structures and focus on message.
The third-person stance is preferred to maintain an objective focus. The use of the first-person style closes the distance between writers and readers; the result undermines the goal of persuasion with evidence. Similarly, the use of second-person referents (you, your, yours) is problematic because either it implies that the author is speaking directly to the reader, which closes the author/reader distance (in the same way “I” does), or it means something like “people in general,” which is less precise.[1]
In terms of content, research writing is marked by the presence of a clear, purposeful, and well-developed message; credible evidence; and a systematic presentation of that support. The following terms explain these common qualities of academic writing.
Thesis: Academic research projects are organized around a point or a “thesis” that members of the intended audience would not already accept as “common sense.” What an audience accepts as “common sense” depends a great deal on the audience, which is why what “counts” as academic research varies from field to field. In any case, readers want to learn something new: a genuine introduction or a unique interpretation of the issue or evidence.
Evidence: Academic research projects rely almost exclusively on evidence to support a point. While other means of persuasion, such as appeals to emotion and logic are deployed in writing for general consumption, readers of academic research writing are more likely to be persuaded by compelling evidence. The sources of this evidence include journal articles and books, newspapers, and many other kinds of documents; Internet references like web pages, information from databases, and other Internet-based forums; and field research (e.g., interviews, experiments, surveys).
Citations: Academic research deploys a systematic citation process that details the origins of the evidence.
Review and Reinforce
Adopting the more formal conventions of academic writing, which contrast in many ways with conversational communication, places a writer in closer proximity to the scholarly community and promotes reader confidence.[2]
These methods elevate conversational or less academic language to a more professional level.
A. Glean from reading: scholars naturally emulate the style and conventions (including vocabulary and phrasing) of published authors in their field.
B. Systematically add sophisticated, documented evidence as support.
C. Minimize repetition of ideas, grammar structures and words by:
1. writing concisely;
2. eliminating the unnecessary use of helping verbs like “make”, “get”, “have” and “do”;
3. minimizing the use of “it” and “there” as main subjects;
4. avoiding the use of contractions and imperatives (and other forms of direct contact “with” the reader); and
5. deleting information classified as obvious or common knowledge.
Exercise #1
Identify the informal or conversational language in each sentence; then revise it without compromising the message.
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Everybody is pushed by the pressure to earn good grades, not by the need for edification or other types of self-improvement.
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Sometimes personal opinions can be blended in with facts to come up with a mind-blowing argument.
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A lot of people think climate change is a natural phenomenon but other people have evidence that it is a consequence of human activity.
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International students don’t make friends very easily on American university campuses because they might not be able or willing to adapt to the local culture.
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As any one science develops, it relies more and more heavily on the things that are happening in other disciplines.
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It is easier to learn a second language from television or radio than from reading something.
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Most people are more concerned with making money when they finish school.
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Physical exercise is the first thing students eliminate when they feel like they don’t have enough time to do everything they need to do.
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Good science is more impressive than good grammar or writing style.
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Writers in my field generally don’t cite references from earlier than ten years back.
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the attitude conveyed by the writing
the language choices that reflect author purpose (to inform, convince, describe or narrate, e.g)
"rules" or organizational elements of writing used to deliver concepts
wording that is not literal, but instead relies on "figures of speech"
words or phrases that are dated and overused
words or phrases that are not standard and are used by a specific group (e.g. cultural or generational)
a unique, new concept, generally presented with persuasive evidence
documented, testable and factual material
information signaling the original source of the material presented